One such birthday I wrote these few naive lines; at the time when the world slept and i woke-up at dawn to just gift him on his just another; born suit day. i share these few lines as the first poem on my blog. This is the friend i've seen ...
Knight of the dark;
Ever smiling lest reveal nothing from the past,
Old Monk visionary; always on the rocks, seldom seen in the drought;
Sings from the heart; shy aves muse, chords cross our lives path;
Here comes Comrades day; thou with we smile, rest all stay at bay;
Yes, world continues to gasp in joy, its only after your born suit day.
hope you folks like my novice work for now ... hope to post a few more of them.
Hi Raghu, nice one :) and what a birthday gift! :)
ReplyDeleteChange indeed is inevitable and the only constant.And a change that is good should always be welcomed :) Looking forward to read more poems along with write-ups as well :)
Change is the only thing that will remain unchanged.
ReplyDeleteThere can't be any bigger gift than this for a best friend :)
Hey Archana and Ravi,
ReplyDeleteI hope you liked the poem. Well seriously, I felt this the best priceless thing i could gift him. I have used the gift as the filler in my blog :)
Koshy should excuse me for that. thanks for the comments.
Hi Raghu
ReplyDeleteWhat ever u said ...about Koshy...
I felt Really Golden Words...
Even though i knew him since few months..
I felt..long bonding with him...Very Nice Guy..
And your words are Nice Gift for a Nice Guy.. :)
Raghu :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, pal!
Shall remain one of the best gifts forever...am so touched!
love...
koshy.